Planning on rewritting and shooting new scene's

When I was color grading the first scene, it dawned on me that it was too simple, story and visual wise. Not much going on. I wanted more out of the scene. More shots. I tried to see what I could do editing wise besides color grading it. The scene felt too static. No sub text at all. It got me thinking about how it could be solved. What is the scene lacking? I realized I have to rewrite the scene. That meant we have to do reshoots and film new scenes. 

On top of all of this, the mics were visible in some of the scenes and I am having a difficult time removing them. It seems much more tough than expected, cap cut is well, not cutting it (no pun intended) and I feel like I have a few options. Luckily, I have a friend who might be able to help me with this exact problem. He has access to Sony Vegas, which is an editing software for images and video. A very good software, and he knows how to use it very well. So he offered guidance for this problem. Were going to meet up in call soon and try to erase the mics from the video hopefully it goes well. 

Also, as I mentioned above I did color grade the first scene, or the footage that we currently have for the first scene.

I tried that this orange pink like color to enhance already orangery aesthetic. Also put some harsh shadows to complement with it